“Yesterday you were looking very beautiful, my love !!!!!!!!! I know you are stressed due to the work, your boss is a big trouble maker !!! But you don’t have to worry about him anymore!!! Also, the bracelet you brought yesterday from the mall, is very pretty but it can be very pricky, so be careful while wearing it as I can’t see you in pain, my love, I know, today your dad on call was talking about your alliance with some engineer guy, just tell him that you don’t want to marry that idiot !!!! You are only mine !! I love you so much !!! ” The message ended.
“wow, Jenny !!! Your boyfriend loves you so much !!! I wish I find someone like him too, where do you guys meet ?? Who proposed first???” I started teasing Jenny, my new roommate after reading this letter which was tucked in a huge bouquet of red roses and was kept on our balcony’s coffee table when we returned from the office.
“But I don’t have a boyfriend” she replied nervously, the visible fear in her eyes and sweat drops on her forehead was telling a different tale.
The transition from “romance” to “horror” was real quick.
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Ooh this was really interesting! Awesome writing Vani <3
Thanks for liking it !!! Although I wasn’t sure about this one to publish
You’re welcome! I’m glad you did! Will you share any more parts to it?
Didn’t think about it !!!😐😐😄😄
You have a way with words! I found this to be a very intriguing read 💓
Thank Hannah😄😄😄
*Thank you😐😐😂
You’re most welcome 🤗🥰
Well written
Thank you 💗💗💗
You’re welcome 💗💗💗
You are gifted Vani! Many people (including me) don’t have this ability to share a big message with so few words! Great post😃
That’s a huge compliment Roshni !!! Means a lot to me 💗💗💗
My pleasure!💜
Wow! what a turn.
Thank you😄😄😄
😱😱😱 WhY???!!! nOoOoOoOoOoOoOo!!!!!!!!!!!!!! God, it’s scary!!😂
Hehe😜😜😜 Thanks
Great post 🙂
Thank you💗💗💗
So much of Vani in this post too 😂
Thanks, ahhhh Anjali di , I was waiting for your review desperately !!! I mean without your review the blogs feels missing💗💗💗
Aww! Thankyou so much ❤️
But how can you be so annoying and so loving so quickly 😂
The same way you are so lovely💗💗💗
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So interesting! I am tagging you on an interesting tag soon!
Thank you very much❤❤❤
You’re welcome
Spooky. 😅
Hehe😈😈 it is
Thanks💟💟
The abrupt ending has shocked the reader and there lies the beauty of it. Your story-ending reminds me of ‘The Open Window’, a story by Saki. Loved it👍.
Thanks 💟💟
This is such a huge compliment 😄😄😄
Welcome. Keep writing. You’ve got it in you👍
Wow didi! This was a good one 😅a little funny also as I found it.
Hehe 😛😛
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And boom! Jenny has a stalker.
Good one!!
Hehe 😈😈
Thank you ❤❤❤
Whoaa! The ending blew my mind😨
Hehe😈😈
Thank you so much for reading ❤❤❤
Ooooooooooo the climax you give!!! 😍😍😍😍
Hehe😈😈
Thanks for reading ❤❤❤
Wow, the end!! ❤️❤️ A starting to wait to read more of your stories dear Vani. Keep up the good work 🤝
Thank you so much for this lovely comment ❤❤❤
This is soo interesting this is a good one!! Keep up good work xx
Thank you so much ❤❤❤
she said
he said
someone s love
and someone s
in fantasee laaand~
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remain true to thyself.
Oh god, scaaaaary!!!!!!! 😲
Hehe😈😈
Thank you ❤❤
Interesting intriguing and very well written dear Vani ❤️
Thank you so much ❤ ❤❤
😶. jenny be like😰😰😰😰😰😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😱😱😱😱😱😱😱
Haha😀😀😀, I bet she is
Oof that took a turn…
yup 😈😈😈
Amazingly written, my friend. Well done 🖤
Thank you so much Ace❤❤❤
Oh my…….this took a rather scary stalkery turn!
Haha 😈😈 what do you expect 🤣 😂
A chilling tale indeed. That escalated quickly!
Way too quickly!!!😅😅😅🙈
Thank you so much ❤ 💓
Oh yes! You’re very welcome 😃
Such an interesting post! ❤️
Thank you so much ❤❤❤
Wow..! It’s interesting..!
Thank you so much ❤❤❤
You’re welcome..!
Oh my God!! Shivani!!!
Haha 😅😅
How could you imagine such a scary thing!!😃🙂🙄
Haha 😄 I have no idea 😅 🤣
Shook. You had me shook.
Hehe😈😈
That was the plan
OMGGGGGGGGGG! *shivers* AAAAH!
How do you write such amazing twists???!!!!!
Haha😈😈
Wooooo!!! Very mysterious. I am getting too curious to know who had sent the bouquet and the letter!!! Is there a next part to the story? I am really excited!!! ❤
Haha, no one really knows 🤔🤔😮😮
Thank you so much for reading tho 💕
Ookayyyy!!! I guess the MYSTERY PREVAILS…. you are most welcome😊😊❤
Haha, love a good plot twist… as long as it’s not in real life 😉 💜
Haha 😈😈 it would be super creepy in real life 😅
Thank you so much for reading ❤❤❤
Oooh, the shock ending in this one was very powerful. Especially since in the message he said ‘you don’t have to worry about your boss anymore…’ That’s super creepy!
Hehe 😈😈 this one was creepy 😅
Thank you So much for reading ❤❤❤
Yikes! I think you enjoy shocking us, Shivani! 🌞
Pretty much 😈😈😈
Well written
Thank you so much for reading ❤❤❤
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Written so much in few words! Good piece of writing vani.